The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the proportion of intake of
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar in a meal, which in excess causes health problems.
Overall
, it can be concluded that,
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However
, our dinner and lunch are mainly comprised with
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As per the information represented in the chart, the first meal of our day is very light with about 14% of sodium
and identical proportions of saturated fats and added sugars. However
, sodium
intake is maximum in dinner, with about 43%, in
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sodium
, the last
meal of our day also
contains saturated fat(37%) and sweeteners(23%). The mid-day meals have significant
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