The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the proportion of intake of
sodium
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, saturated fat and added sugar in a meal, which in excess causes health problems.
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, it can be concluded that
,
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the
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apply
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sodium
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and
the
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apply
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saturated fats
forms
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the major components of dinner
whereas
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the
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snack items
holds
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hold
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the major portion of added sugars.
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, our dinner and lunch are mainly comprised
with
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of
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sodium
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. As per the information represented in the chart, the first meal of our day is very light with about 14% of
sodium
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and identical proportions of saturated fats and added sugars.
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,
sodium
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intake is maximum in dinner, with about 43%,
in
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contrast
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it serves to be the minor component of pastime foods. In
addtion
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addition
to
sodium
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, the
last
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meal of our day
also
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contains saturated fat(37%) and sweeteners(23%). The mid-day meals have
significant
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percentage of all
the
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apply
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three nutrients ranging from 20% to 30%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average percentage
  • nutrients
  • sodium
  • saturated fat
  • added sugars
  • typical meals
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • snacks
  • consumption
  • excess
  • health implications
  • comparison
  • trend
  • pattern
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