The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The maps
illustrates
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the town of Langley
after
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40 years ago .
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It can
be see
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in
depict
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apply
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the
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place
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change and development .
First
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place
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it can be clear the area don't
developed
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develop
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the area industrial in
same
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the same
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place
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near to
town house
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townhouse
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according to
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effect to people reseat more
desass
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deals
on one hand
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, on one hand,
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the
place
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not
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have entertainment the children and everything not
orgnized
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organised
. Scand depict the area development in north industrial and in the west the park the flats reconstructation the
place
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drone nice way and cafe reshaping separate . Surrounding is large the street
heavy
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not
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crowded
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words place with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "depict" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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