The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided chart illustrates the most
choosen
sport to play in New Zealand during the year 2002 . Correct your spelling
chosen
Also
, both girls and boys chose to take part in many kinds of sports the most popular ones being netball , soccer and swimming .
Overall
most boys seem to enjoy soccer as 25% toke
part in it during 2002 Correct your spelling
took
follwing
closely after Correct your spelling
following
is
other sports at about 20% . Unnecessary verb
apply
While
a handfull
of girls participated in netball and swimming at a Correct your spelling
handful
precentage
between 20 to 25 Correct your spelling
percentage
precente
. Correct your spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, not many boys liked to play netball with less than 5% of them taking part in it . In addition
, cricket seems to not be a popular choice for girls because only a couple of them played cricket in 2002 .Submitted by aljouri50x50 on
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