The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of five industry shares of the economy in Brazil in 2009 and 2019 with an estimated
number
for the year 2029.
Firstly
, it could be seen that a steady increase is shown and predicted in the finance industry as it gradually increases from about 32% to 37% to 42%, which receives the highest average of Brazil's economy.
On the other hand
, it can be seen that manufacturing purposes have a major decrease and prediction shows to have a downfall from 22% to only 5%. As to tourism, the percentage is quite stable as it only decreases by 5% and expects the same
number
in the next 10 years.
Lastly
, food processing and oil, coal and gas are seen to have a familiar pattern as the
number
increased in the year 2019.
However
, it is predicted that the numbers will be the same as in the year 2009.
To conclude
, these industries have various percentages of Brazil's economy as some increase and decrease.
However
, it is likely predicted that some percentage are recited to the previous
number
again as it increases and
then
decreases to the same
number
in 2009.
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