The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
#bar #five #industries’ #percentage #brazil’s #economy #forecast #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The bar chart represents the percentage of five different industries in Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a prediction for 2029.
There were three visible trends in the year 2009. Finance
had
experienced a slight increase from 32% in 2009 to 37% in 2009, and it is predicted to reach 42% in 2029. Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, food processing and oil, coal and gas had increased from 11% and 27% in 2009 to 22% and 32% respectively in 2019 and they are forecasted to come back to their initial figure in 2009.
Meanwhile, tourism had
experienced a downward trend as it began at 27% in 2009 and declined to 21% in 2019 before being estimated to have the same percentage as it was in 2029. Manufacturing had declined from 22% in 2009 to 17% in 2019, and it is going to have Unnecessary verb
apply
dramatic
decrease to 5% in 2029.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
a dramatic
from
the five sectors, tourism and manufacturing experienced a decline. Change preposition
of
In contrast
,finances tended to increase, followed by food processing, oil, coal and gas, which had mild variations.Submitted by riani.the2 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
▼