The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart demonstrates the proportion of female students enrolling into colleges after passing out from their schools in Canada, Germany, Japan, the

UK

, and the USA in the years 1970 and 2005.

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Canada exhibited a stable

proportipon

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proportion

of

school-leavers

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school leavers

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enrolling

into

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further

studies for both

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years.

However

, Japanese students' promotion to

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level of education was the least in the period. In the

year

1970, about 35% of the school passed-outs were about to acquire higher studies in the

UK

whereas

this

proportion was raised by 5% in America in the

year

1970.

Moreover

, in Germany, half of the school-leavers were going to pursue their

further

level of education,

in contrast

, in Japan, only 20% of pupils got admitted into the next course after their school.

Furthermore

, Canadian students who got admission

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higher education were three times that of

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. And of course, their proportion was stable even for the

year

2005.

On the other hand

, for the

year

2005, the admissions were almost doubled in the

UK

and Japan. By

this

increment, the

UK

's higher school admissions were identical to

Canada

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. The enrollments in the USA

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increased by 20%

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Germany

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, whose admissions were 5% augmented than in 1970.