The pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy generated from five different sources, namely Hydropower, Oil, Nuclear power, Coal, Natural gas, in a particular nation between 1983 and 2003.
The pie graph provides the percentage of energy data from which a particular nation generated from different sources
such
as oil, hydropower, nuclear power
, coal, and natural gas.
Overall
, oil decreased the highest over the given period. By contrast
, nuclear power
, and coal increased the highest among all energies.
Looking at the pie graph more closely, one can see that oil dropped by 9% point from 42% in 1980 to 33% in 1990. Also
, natural gas experienced slightly a downward over the 10-year period, with 1 % point from 26% in 1980 to 25% in 1990. In contrast
, coal, and nuclear power
went up 5% point with 27% and 10% in 1990.
Nevertheless
, hydroelectric power
has not shown fluctuation.
In conclusion, most energies decreased for 10 years.Submitted by garim4645 on
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