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The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table given provides information on how many non-permanent migrants worked in 4 countries,namely
Australia
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, New
Zealand
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, the UK, and the USA,between the years 2003 and 2006.
Overall
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,it shows an upward trend throughout the three-year period,in which the state of America stood the most,followed by the UK,
Australia
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, and New
Zealand
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.
In addition
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, the numbers in the USA in 2006 were 3 times higher than that in
Australia
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,more than 7 times that in New
Zealand
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.
Moreover
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, the quantity of foreign-born nationals in
Australia
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 sharply rose to over 200,000, increasing two-thirds in total by 2006. Regarding the USA, the amount of migrant employment increased by approximately 100,000 over the 3-year period.
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, the figures for the UK and
Australia
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 grew from over 130,000 and 150,000 to 260,000 and 2190,000 respectively.
Furthermore
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, New
Zealand
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,the smallest population of migrants, displayed a gradual growth of around 20,000 after the following three years.
On the other hand
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,
this
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 smallest country is represented by the highest average growth per population,more than the rest countries mentioned.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, zealand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temporary migrant workers
  • trends
  • absolute numbers
  • per 1,000 people
  • growth rate
  • per capita
  • labor markets
  • economies
  • significant
  • imply
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