The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Firstly
we can see that the community Schools
had the highest rate in 2009 and overall
throughout the years it's still the highest percentage. Unlike the specialist Schools
that have the lowest rates compared to the other Schools
. The most balanced school from what we can see will be the voluntary-controlled Schools
. In recent years specialist Schools
and Grammar Schools
have been significantly lower than the other schools
. Lastly
we should know what is it that makes Community Add a comma
Lastly,
Schools
higher than the others and at the same time
we should know why Specialist Add a comma
time,
Schools
have the lowest rates and we should not forget about the other two Schools
. We should take notice why
there are no Change preposition
of why
such
improvements and almost only downfalls.Submitted by alaanoudaltammaami on
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