The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, people are using more consumer goods like refrigerator and washing machine. Does this have more advantages or disadvantages?

Some children spend every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

Today more people put personal and private information online to do everyday activities such as banking, shopping, and socializing. Is this a positive or negative development?