You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays,

science

is promoted to a very high stage and some

people

think that the most

esstential

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essential

mean

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means

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of

science

aim to is should be to develop

human's

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human

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lives. In general,

science

has been

appealed

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applied

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in most human activities. I think that most of

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the invention

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invention

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inventions

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from

science

is

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are

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to improve

people

's lives but some of them

is

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useless and

in

contrast

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some invention is born to

devast lifes

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devastate lives

.

Firstly

, there

is

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are

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some inventions

has

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that have

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contributed a lot of benefits to

human

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humans

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which can

mention

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be mentioned

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are electric devices, washing

chemical

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chemicals

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,

architectual

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architectural

and hospital

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

pieces of equipment

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.

For example

, washing

chemical

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chemicals

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is a significant chemistry invention

such

as soap can kill bacteria

which

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apply

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the main cause of disease. Another example is the electric devices, that help

people

reduce manual force and use

to

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it to

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make complex pieces.

Bt

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some

of

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apply

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electric devices make

people

become lazier.

On the other hand

,

science

also

create

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creates

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the

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apply

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weapons. Some

people

claim that it

use

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is used

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to protect and defend but I think that it

mainly

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is mainly

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for killing

human

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humans

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.

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, in

word war

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World War

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I and II,

people

use

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used

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science

for

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to

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create guns, tanks, variety of

bomb

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bombs

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, and the most

noticable

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noticeable

notable

is

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was

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the nuclear bomb which

kill

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killed

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a

lots

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lot

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people

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of people

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and

make

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made

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that

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the

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land cannot live anymore. Recently the government have made

rule

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rules

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to reduce

create

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the number of

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gun

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guns

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. In conclusion,

science

is appealing in many fields and become a necessary thing to enhance human lives;

however

, it

still

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is still

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a main factor

to destroy

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in destroying

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life.