Chart A below shows the rate of oil consumption (in millions of barrel)in a small country from 1950 to 2010.Chart B shows the number of people employed in the oil industry in that country,and also the rate of unemployment throughout the country over the same time.

The line graph illustrates the consumption of grease

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the bar chart shows the

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who are working in the oil industry and the number of

unemployments

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in the country from 1950 to 2010. The units of measurement are

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of barrels , a

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thousand

and

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percentages

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respectively

. As we can see, there were similar trends between

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A and employed individuals starting in 1950 until 1970. Both of the paces were slightly increased in digits but eventually fell to the initial numeral.

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, in 2010, a positive turn

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both have significant peak points ended with 50 million

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barrels and 3100 people, respectively.

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unemployments

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higher proportion

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4% in 1950 but surprisingly dropped to 1.6% after 60 years.

Overall

,

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the high demands on the

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of oil in the communities over the past decades, more and more job

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opportunities

have been created in

such

industries thereby joblessness in these years had reduced.