The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagrams
illustrate
provide data on transport and Verb problem
apply
car
use in Edmonton and, the
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peoples
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people's
peoples'
reason
for using the Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
car
in city
.
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the city
Overall
it is clear that
the a
correlation between Choose an article
the
a
two
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the two
reason
for using Edmonton Change to a plural noun
reasons
car
the Fix the agreement mistake
cars
reaslt
similar by approximately 15%
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result
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the chart show that the highest figures in
using Change preposition
for
this
car
commute
to work Fix the infinitive
to commute
the
percentage Correct article usage
apply
more
than half Because, every people have need to show Change preposition
of more
popular
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popularity
while
the taxi decline numbers
a very small rate . Verb problem
is
Whereas
, light rail transit rose the percentage 35
% think that Change preposition
of 35
the
comfortable transportation . On the other Correct pronoun usage
it the
hands
, the reason for using the Fix the agreement mistake
hand
car
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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