The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagrams
illustrate
Verb problem
apply
show examples
provide data on transport and
car
use in Edmonton and,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
peoples
Change to a genitive case
people's
peoples'
show examples
reason
Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
show examples
for using the
car
in
city
Add an article
the city
show examples
.
Overall
it is clear that
the a
Choose an article
the
a
show examples
correlation between
two
Correct article usage
the two
show examples
reason
Change to a plural noun
reasons
show examples
for using Edmonton
car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
show examples
the
reaslt
Correct your spelling
result
similar by approximately 15%
According to
the chart show that the highest figures
in
Change preposition
for
show examples
using
this
car
commute
Fix the infinitive
to commute
show examples
to work
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
percentage
more
Change preposition
of more
show examples
than half Because, every people have need to show
popular
Replace the word
popularity
show examples
while
the taxi decline
numbers
Verb problem
is
show examples
a very small rate .
Whereas
, light rail transit rose the percentage
35
Change preposition
of 35
show examples
% think that
the
Correct pronoun usage
it the
show examples
comfortable transportation . On the other
hands
Fix the agreement mistake
hand
show examples
, the reason for using the
car
tracking children to school and business nearly numbers for two fifth.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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  • proportion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • transportation habits
  • environmental awareness
  • government policies
  • public transport infrastructure
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  • congestion
  • environmental quality
  • future implications
  • adapt
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