You recently bought a piece of équipement for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain what happened when you phoned the shop Say what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir / Mme
I'am
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I am
writing
this
letter to inform you about a
problem
with your
campany
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company
. I presenting in
this
letter the details of
this
problem
.
Firstly
, I bought a microwave
of
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from
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your
campany
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company
last
week. In the moment of
using
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use
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,
this
microwave did not
fonction
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function
. I
readed
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read
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the guide of use more than 3 times and I don't understand the
problem
.
Secondly
, I phoned the
shop
where I bought the microwave.
Also
, I had
a problems
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a problem
problems
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with
this
shop
.
First,
no person responded to the call for 3 days. After that, the seller responded
me
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to me
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and mentioned that the director of the
shop
is
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was
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the only person who
discuss
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discussed
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with him
this
problem
. He gives me another number.
On the other hand
, my conversation with the director was not
interessant
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interesting
. He mentioned that the
problem
needs
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needed
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a technical consultation and the
shop
did not
had
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have
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this
service. I realised
this
service
on
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was on
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my way.
Finally
,
I'am
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I am
asking your
campany
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company
to return
me
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apply
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my money
includ
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include
including
the fees
of
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for
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technical consultation.
I'am
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I am
waiting
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waiting for
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your response
for
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to
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my letter. Yours Sincerely Rabeb
Submitted by rabebhamdi on

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coherence and cohesion
You should clearly organize your letter into paragraphs. This increases readability and helps to convey your ideas more effectively.
task achievement
It's important to maintain a polite and professional tone throughout the letter, ensuring that the language and expressions are formal.
coherence and cohesion
You described each problem step-by-step, making it easy to follow the issue you faced.
task achievement
You provided a complete response by explaining the problem, what happened when you contacted the shop, and what you expect to be done about it.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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