The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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urban population
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historical data
urbanization trends
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developed countries
developing countries
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upward trend
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comparative analysis
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