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The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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compare
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 the information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future in (
whole
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the whole
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world
word
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world
,Africa,Asia,
Latin
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and Latin
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 America)
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,
waht
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what
 stand out from the bar chart
that
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 Africa was the lowest in 1950
while
 Latin America was the highest in 1950 and 2030. now turning on the details it can noticed that the growth of
urban
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 population was the lowest in 1950 in Africa and Asia
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% and 15%
while
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 in 2000 they
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lowst
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lowest
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 40% and 35% in 2030 have a
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 about 50% and 55%
while
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 america was
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almost
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peak
aroud
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around
 80% in 2030 and in 2000 around 70% in 1950 was under 50% regarding
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wholw
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whole
how
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world
worked
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ancraes
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acres
 about 60% and in 2000 under 50% and in 1950 about 30%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • future predictions
  • historical data
  • urbanization trends
  • rates of growth
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic development
  • migration
  • government policies
  • upward trend
  • pace of urbanization
  • catching up
  • comparative analysis
  • regional differences
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