The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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population was the lowest in 1950 in Africa and Asia

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban population
future predictions
historical data
urbanization trends
rates of growth
developed countries
developing countries
economic development
migration
government policies
upward trend
pace of urbanization
catching up
comparative analysis
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