Write a letter to the restaurant manager to organise a party. Why you want to throw the party What special arrangements you will need Any relevant questions

#restaurant #manager #organise #party #arrangements #questions

Restaurant Manager, Dear

sir

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Sir

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, Hope you are

good

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well

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Actuallly

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Actually

last

week I was engaged, So that's why I wanna give a party to my all friends and relatives. Can you organise a party

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Moreover

, I want some special arrangements like

unique

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a unique

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welcoming way and all special dishes

serve

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served

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first.

Furthermore

, How much money will

cover

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be covered

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for

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this

party with all

facilities

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the facilities

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like free internet, Parking and without

this

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these

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facilities. Hope I

recieve

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receive

a good reply from you. Thanks Gursewak

singh

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Singh

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Submitted by damandhillon75026 on Sat Jul 20 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

To improve the logical structure, the letter should have a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Use linking words to smoothly transition between the points.

Task Achievement

Make sure to address all parts of the question in detail and provide a full and complete response.

Task Achievement

The writing tone could be more professional. Phrases like 'I wanna' can be replaced with 'I would like to.'

Task Achievement

You've included all necessary parts: the reason for the party, the special arrangements needed, and the questions for the manager.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter has a pleasant and friendly tone, which is welcoming.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

81 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the restaurant manager to organise a party. Why you want to throw the party What special arrangements you will need Any relevant questions

The Closing

Hosting international sporting competitions is good,but few people think this causes too many problems. Explain both views and tell your opinion.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People who go live in other countries should follow their customs and traditions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

you have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that we booked by the organiser of a company. write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include, details about the meeting, the problem you face and what should be done.