The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and percentages per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The bar chart depicts the consumption of five portions of
fruit
and vegetables in British people
daily life between 2001 and 2008 in Change noun form
people's
percentage
.
Overall
, There are different percentages among groups of people
which are men
, women
and kids.
The most
highest Change the adjective
apply
percentage
of vegetable consumers are women
. Especially, in 2006 the percentage
was about 35 per cent compared to men
that
Correct pronoun usage
who
consume
Wrong verb form
consumed
fruit
just less than 30 per cent. In contrast
, children is
the group of Change the verb form
are
people
that less consume fruits and vegetables. In
2001 to 2003, the figure Change preposition
From
of
Change preposition
for
fruit
consumption percentage
of children was just only about 10% per cent compared to women
and men
.
To summarise, Youngers who lived
in Wrong verb form
live
United
Kingdom Correct article usage
the United
is
the group of Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
who ate
less Wrong verb form
eat
of
Change preposition
apply
fruit
and vegetables than women
and men
.Submitted by matty10
on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fruit, people, percentage, men, women with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS
Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!