The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provided information about the proportion of males and females in employment in three countries in the years 2005 and 2015.
Overall
, the highest proportion of males and females is in Sweden, while
the smallest percentage is in South Korea.
In terms of, employment rates countrymen in Canada made up 60%, furthermore
, in 2005, this
increased by merely one in ten. In contrast
, males in South Korea comprised three quarters in 2005, but the surge was only around 4% after a 10-year period. In 2005 Sweden frequently increased four-fifths but in the year 2015, fell to around one in ten.
Respectively, women in Canada made up just over a third,
with rapid growth by just over a half in 2015. South Korea in 2005 comprised just under a third,
while
frequently increased by merely 2% in 2015. The proportion of Sweden in 2005 made up 45%, furthermore
, this
increased to 50% after a 10-year period.Submitted by mamashukuruvbobur31 on
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