The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below demonstrates the number of
women
and men
who passed their driving test in one Asian country from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, the percentage
of women
passing have
always been higher than Change the verb form
has
men
within the 30 year
period, with Add a hyphen
30-year
the
Correct article usage
apply
women
also
achieving the highest percentage
of driving tests passed ever recorded on the table.
In 1980, women
achieved approximately 50% on the chart , compared to the
mere 30% of Correct article usage
a
men
. This
difference would fluctuate in the next periods, but the women
's percentage
of driving tests passed were
always higher compared to Correct subject-verb agreement
was
men
. In 1990, the number of women
passed increased by about 4%, whereas
the men
increased by almost 10% shortening the gap down to 14% only.
Between 2000 and 2010, the Correct quantifier usage
number of men
percentage
of men
that
got their driver's licence was roughly 50%, and Correct pronoun usage
who
this
number did not change in 2010. Women
experienced a suddne
surge in numbers, achieving nearly 70%, the highest Correct your spelling
sudden
percentage
on this
bar chart. Over the next 10 years, the numbers would decrease slowly, ending at 65% in 2010.Submitted by minhlieu.hnd on
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