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The charts below illustrate which of 3 fast food restaurants were the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below illustrate which of 3 fast food restaurants were the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The four Pie diagrams represent the
popularity
 of three fast food outlets amongst
teenagers
 in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and their forecast for 2027 . In an overview , one country’s second choice is the other
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 least
favourite
 and
vies
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 versa . The choice of
teenagers
 will change in one country by 2027 .
Meanwhile
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 it will remain the same in the other nation with reduced
popularity
 . In Vietnam ,
Burger
 King was the first choice of
teenagers
 in 2017 at around 53 % . Immediately followed by MC Donald’s at around 43% .
whereas
KFC
 was the least popular . By 2027 the
popularity
 of MacDonald’s will increase by around 15 % to become the youngster’s
favourite
 . Though
Burger
 King will move to
the
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second place, its
popularity
 will be more than six times that of
KFC
. In Indonesia, McDonald’s was the
favourite
 in 2017 with nearly
three quarters
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of
teenagers
 opting for it . The second
favourite
KFC
 was way behind and close to
Burger
 King . In 2027 though McDonald’s will remain in the top , a portion of its previous majority will be taken over by
KFC
 in 2027 .
This
 will make
KFC
 more than 3 times ahead of
Burger
 King
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