The diagrams below show the process of making chocolate. Some university students live with their families while studying, but others prefer to move away from home. Do the benefits of moving out attend university outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, some college students choose to live separately from their families during their

study

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. Despite

of

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all of the disadvantages, it seems to me that the advantages outweigh the

diadvantages

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disadvantages

. There are some advantages when college students live independently. , living alone makes them

be

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more independent. It

teachs

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teaches

them how to take care of themselves without

depend

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on others.

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, they have to know how to keep their residence clean, how to pay the electricity bill, and

another

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household things that they might not do

while

living with their family.

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, living alone sometimes

build

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more

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conducive and more comfortable environment to study. There

is

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some cases when a student

live

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lives

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with a large

family

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number of family

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members or siblings

in

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at

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young

ages

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age

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. The condition makes their home quite noisy and

disturb

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them to study.

However

, living outside

families

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families'

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residence

also

bring

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brings

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disadvantage

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disadvantages

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. The biggest disadvantage is the expenses they should

spent

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spend

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. Most of

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the residence

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residence

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residents

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, especially in big

city

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cities

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and strategic

area

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areas

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,

usually

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are usually

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quite expensive.

Moreover

, they

also

have to prepare some money for their living expenses,

such

as to buy food, pay electricity

bill

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bills

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, or other household expenses. Still, it will not become a big problem if they know how to manage their allowance properly. From

this

, I believe that living independently

bring

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brings

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more advantages for

student

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students

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college

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in college

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,

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because it will

build

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help

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them to become more mature

individual

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individuals

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who can live independently.