The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts show the distribution of UK graduates and
postgraduates
in 2008 who did not find full-time employment
Overall
the first chart shows that most graduates 29,665 went on to further
education while
17,735 went on to part-time work. 16,235 graduates were unemployed and 3,500 went on to volunteer work
The second chart shows that most postgraduates
also
went on to further
education 2,725. 2,535 postgraduates
went on to part-time work while
1,625 went on to be unemployed. Only 345 postgraduates
volunteeredSubmitted by sa_artek on
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