The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK, 2000-2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK, 2000-2010

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
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The given line chart demonstrates data about the rates of employees who worked in 3 different sectors of the economy in the UK between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, all items that showed the number of people who work in various sections of the UK economy except the privet
sector
, which had a falling trend, increased. The public
sector
is the main section where people work.
According to
the plot, the main category which people chose for occupations in 2000 was the privet
sector
at 48% ,yet it reduced slightly to 20% in 2010 and couch up to the third level.
In addition
, the number of
this
motivation was the same as in the public
sector
in 2003. The diagram illustrates two other things that had a rising direction because the public
sector
, the second one, had 38% from 2000 to 2002;
then
it climbed significantly to 49% in 2005;
however
,it declined to 45%, but went up to 51% in 2010 so that hit the first level. At the start, self-employed had 18%;
thereafter
, it is waved;
moreover
, the figure in both 2003 and 2004 was equal to 2000;
nevertheless
, grew moderately to 30% in the period of 2
last
years;
as a result
, reached the second level.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sector with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rates
  • economy
  • sectors
  • agriculture
  • manufacturing
  • services
  • trends
  • increases
  • decreases
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • economic policies
  • technological advancements
  • global market demands
  • patterns
  • decade
  • significant changes
  • abrupt changes
  • stability
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