The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These maps illustrate the present plan of a high school

sports

center, and how it would be after rehabilitation in the future.

Overall

, the

sports

building will be larger with new facilities and

would

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include the outdoor courts which are separated actually from the main building. Presently, the

sport

Change the noun form

sports

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center

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centre

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has two outdoor spaces which would be replaced in the west direction with a large leisure pool, a changing

room

, and a

sports

shop. The East outdoor court would be changed into a spacious

sports

hall, a changing

room

, two dance

studio

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and a cafe. The main building would remain the same with only the gym being

extented

Correct your spelling

extended

. The reception, the 25 m pool, the changing

room

and the seating

room

would not be replaced and would remain in the same position.

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