The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These maps illustrate the present plan of a high school

sports

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center, and how it would be after rehabilitation in the future.

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, the

sports

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building will be larger with new facilities and

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include the outdoor courts which are separated actually from the main building. Presently, the

sport

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center

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has two outdoor spaces which would be replaced in the west direction with a large leisure pool, a changing

room

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, and a

sports

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shop. The East outdoor court would be changed into a spacious

sports

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hall, a changing

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, two dance

studio

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and a cafe. The main building would remain the same with only the gym being

extented

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extended

. The reception, the 25 m pool, the changing

room

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and the seating

room

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would not be replaced and would remain in the same position.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, room with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

132 words

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