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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
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 information about the proportion of homes
in
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owned and rented in England and Wales from the year 1918 to 2011. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, the percentage of
households
in
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renting accommodation decreased gradually between 1961 and 2001.
While
 there was a slight increase of
households
 in owned at the same year.
Initially
, in 1981, there was a significant figure of people who
renting
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house
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 which was well over 75%.
In contrast
, the percentage of owning homes was only about 22%. 
On the other hand
, between 2001 and 2011, the number of percent who owned
households
 dropped suddenly, reaching just above 64%. Unlike the proportion of renting in 2011 which climbed to nearly 35%. One notable point is that owning and renting
households
 were the same by 1971 by roughly 50%.
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