The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.

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information about the proportion of homes

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owned and rented in England and Wales from the year 1918 to 2011. Looking from an

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perspective, the percentage of

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renting accommodation decreased gradually between 1961 and 2001.

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there was a slight increase of

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in owned at the same year.

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, in 1981, there was a significant figure of people who

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which was well over 75%.

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, the percentage of owning homes was only about 22%.

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, between 2001 and 2011, the number of percent who owned

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dropped suddenly, reaching just above 64%. Unlike the proportion of renting in 2011 which climbed to nearly 35%. One notable point is that owning and renting

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were the same by 1971 by roughly 50%.

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.

The number of students who choose to study mathematics at university is low. Why do you think this is? What can be done about this situation?

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The mass media, such as TV, radio and newspapers, have an influence on people, particularly on younger generations. It plays a pivotal role in shaping the opinions of people, especially teenagers and young people. To what extent do you agree with this? Please give examples.

More and more people are shifting to a plant-based diet. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?