The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities. Write at least 150 words.

The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities. Write at least 150 words.
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The demonstrated diagram illustrates the average time per day of males and females in one country spent on daily activities.
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the data both sides are extremely balanced, most likely the way how they made an agreement between themselves in the house. The table contains of 16 the most common routine activities,
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as sleep, resting, social life,housework, travel etc. Surprisingly in the UK, men are less likely to socialise, the data shows 1.22 to 1.32,
nevertheless
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, they tend to spend more time on hobbies, games and travelling than women. In the
overall
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section of employment and study, boys are more productive,
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they sleep less,
however
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, girls are more likely to be busy with housework, childcare, and voluntary work and sleep more. The one who spends more hours on sports and watching TV is predictably the man's section.
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women are more likely to care for themselves, rest more and read books.
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