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The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Image: The map of Oakwood town

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Image: The map of Oakwood town
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The graphics represent the modifications made in
Westley
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since
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from
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 1815 till
present
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the present
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 .
Overall
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, a great deal of changes has been
done
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made
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 to
Westley
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 since 1815 . the only thing remaining
same
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the same
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 is the Lake Linton .A
rail road
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railroad
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 has replaced the road to London over the years . All greeneries have been replaced with places of public interest .
Westley
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 has changed over to a township over the years In 1815 there was a road over the river twine to London , which
has been
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was
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 replaced by the new railway line having a station in the township .The inside roads
also
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has
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have
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 been developed and extended over the years . The area of the open fields has been occupied by the railway station . Towards the Tinton
Village
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Village,
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 the old Lord
Westley
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's House has been demolished and the place is currently having a hotel and pub . The area of the old market square , town hall and houses
have
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has
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 been modified into business and shopping areas by demolishing the houses
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