The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
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pie chart indicates the proportion of contribution to the economy of Turkey based on eight different categories.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the agricultural industry was 14% in 2016 and it increased to 24%, which had the biggest percentages in 2000.
In addition
, it is clear the healthcare and education sectors had no significant changes in both years and had a second proportion of 17%. Looking at the pie chart more closely, one can see that the trade, utilities and transportation industries slightly declined from 16% to 14%.
Furthermore
, there were similar decreasing trends in the manufacturing industry and finance, business and other sectors between 2016 and 2000.
Similarly
, the construction sector
also
dropped from 10% to 3% and it was the lowest proportion in 2000.
In contrast
, the leisure and hospitality sectors went up from 14% to 17%, and the government sector
also
increased by 3% .
Additionally
, there was a significant change in agriculture, which increased 10% more than in the year 2006.
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