The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Employment rates, education and averange anuual income, 2015: Country, Employment rate, Average income

The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Employment rates, education and averange anuual income, 2015: Country, Employment rate, Average income
The chart gives information regarding Education, Job rates and average annual wages of
people
in eight countries.
Overall
, there is no significant
co-relation
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between qualifications and employment rates .
whereas
there is more than 10 times difference in the annual
income
of the
people
amongst countries .
Norway
stands out as top in all
the
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aspects The employment rate has a variation of around 24% amongst the given nations where
Norway
stands first at 74.8% and Greece at the lowest
in
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50.8%. Austria,
Norway
and
UK
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all have more than 70% of
people
with jobs . The difference between qualified
people
within these 7 nations
are
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around 20% . It does not seem to correlate with the job rates since Portugal with only 22.9% educated
people
has 63.9% employment .
Whereas
there is a huge variation in yearly
income
in
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between these nations . Bulgaria has a yearly
income
of only 3,332 pounds
whereas
in
Norway
it is 41,483 . Portugal, Latvia, Greece and Bulgaria all belong to 4- digit yearly
income
category
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