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The chart below show the percentage of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.

The chart below show the percentage of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.
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The pie chart given compares the number of bilingual and multilingual British university
students
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 living in England across the two different years of 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, if we take the six
categories
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 in combination, it is evident that the highest percentage occurred among
students
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 who spoke only Spanish
in addition
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 to
English
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,
while
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 other
categories
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 only ranged from 10% to 20%. The proportion of
students
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 who only spoke Spanish
besides
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English
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 was the highest in both years, making up roughly one-third of the total, with 30% in 2000 and 35% in 2010.
In contrast
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, during 2000, the lowest rates were for German-speaking
students
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 only and
students
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 who spoke two other languages, where the percentages were similar to 10%. In 2010, these two
categories
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 still remained the lowest;
however
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,
this
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 year,
this
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 10% was
also
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 shared by
students
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 who solely used
English
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 and those who spoke French
along with
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English
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.
This
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 was considered a decrease since these
categories
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 were at 20% and 15% in the previous year.
This
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 leaves the
last
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 category,
students
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 who spoke another language aside from those mentioned in the diagram, with 15% in 2000 and a 5% elevation in 2010, equivalent to 20% in the second year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, categories, english with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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