The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates
working
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the working
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hours
and salaries of four different majors.
overall
, there are four different types of
feeled
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staff
, Fire services,
policeservices
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police services
,Nurses,and Teachers. The highest working
hours
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are
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Nurses
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whereas
the lowest one is
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for Teacher
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Teacher
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Teachers
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,with the annual income for
the
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Nurses
is
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being
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approximately,37,500.
In
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other
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the other
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hand
teachers
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teachers'
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annual
salarry
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salary
exactly
thirty three
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thousand and six hundred.
Comming
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to the Police sector
there
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their
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working
hours
almost
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thirty five
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thirty-five
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per week with
peak
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a peak
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annual income which is
fifty two
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fifty-two
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thousand and fifty pounds a year.About
Fire
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the Fire
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service section the second highest worked
hours
per week
near to
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nearly
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40
hours
whith
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with
the second place of
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the high
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annual budget 48,700.
finally
, the most
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working
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hours
amangs
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among
amongst
all is Nuses which
almost
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fifty five
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fifty-five
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hours
per week, that
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is quit
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quit
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quite
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high and hard work to do.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Occupations
  • Salaries
  • Working hours
  • Average
  • Annual
  • Comparison
  • Discrepancies
  • Professions
  • Doctors
  • Teachers
  • Engineers
  • Retail workers
  • Balanced
  • High-paying
  • Low-paying
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