The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
As can be seen, the given pie charts show information about 5 different types of
energy
production
in France in different two years (1995 and 2005).
overall
, we can notice that the percentage of all energy
production
increased in 2005 except for petrol which decreased.
Also
, it appears that the percentage of production
of coal was the highest in both years, while
the least were nuclear and other kinds of energy
.
The three biggest energy
production
were coal, gas
and petrol , 29.80, 29.63 and 29.27 respectively in 1995. In 2005 Coal and gas increased to 30.93 and 30.31 per cent
while
petrol decreased to 19.55 per cent
.
The least energy
sources were nuclear and other energy
productions, As the percentage of nuclear was 6.40 in 1995 and increased to 10.10 per cent
in 2005. furthermore
, other sources of energy
doubled from 4.% per cent
to 9.10 per cent
in 2005.Submitted by s.nafa2209 on
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