The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
As can be seen, the given pie charts show information about 5 different types of
energy
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production
in France in different two years (1995 and 2005).
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overall
, we can notice that the percentage of all Linking Words
energy
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production
increased in 2005 except for petrol which decreased.
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Also
, it appears that the percentage of Linking Words
production
of coal was the highest in both years, Use synonyms
while
the least were nuclear and other kinds of Linking Words
energy
.
The three biggest Use synonyms
energy
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production
were coal, gas
and petrol , 29.80, 29.63 and 29.27 respectively in 1995. In 2005 Coal and gas increased to 30.93 and 30.31 per Use synonyms
cent
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while
petrol decreased to 19.55 per Linking Words
cent
.
The least Use synonyms
energy
sources were nuclear and other Use synonyms
energy
productions, As the percentage of nuclear was 6.40 in 1995 and increased to 10.10 per Use synonyms
cent
in 2005. Use synonyms
furthermore
, other sources of Linking Words
energy
doubled from 4.% per Use synonyms
cent
to 9.10 per Use synonyms
cent
in 2005.Use synonyms
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