The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Money spend in the UK by overseas visitors

The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Money spend in the UK by overseas visitors
The Graph and pie charts give information regarding the amount spent by outside
visitors
in the UK over 30
years
from 1980 ,
as well as
it gives details of the purpose for their visit in the
years
1980 and 2010.
Overall
,The cash spent by foreigners in the UK has increased over the
years
in spite of wide fluctuations in between .
Whereas
the majority of outside
visitors
remained as holidaymakers in both
years
. The expenditure of international
visitors
started at around 8000 million pounds in 1980 . But there was an initial decline in the outside income for the first 5
years
. Later it increased and with some fluctuations in between reached the highest around the year 1996 at 12000 million pounds . Again, with fluctuations it settled at above 10,500 million pounds in the year 2010 Among the international
visitors
, there was an increase for business people and familial
visitors
.in 2010 . miscellaneous
visitors
reduced by 30 %
whereas
the majority remained as holidaymakers , though there was a reduction in their number
Submitted by drcamt on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: