The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Money spend in the UK by overseas visitors
The Graph and pie charts give information regarding the amount spent by outside
visitors
in the UK over 30 Use synonyms
years
from 1980 , Use synonyms
as well as
it gives details of the purpose for their visit in the Linking Words
years
1980 and 2010.
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Overall
,The cash spent by foreigners in the UK has increased over the Linking Words
years
in spite of wide fluctuations in between . Use synonyms
Whereas
the majority of outside Linking Words
visitors
remained as holidaymakers in both Use synonyms
years
.
The expenditure of international Use synonyms
visitors
started at around 8000 million pounds in 1980 . But there was an initial decline in the outside income for the first 5 Use synonyms
years
. Later it increased and with some fluctuations in between reached the highest around the year 1996 at 12000 million pounds . Again, with fluctuations it settled at above 10,500 million pounds in the year 2010
Among the international Use synonyms
visitors
, there was an increase for business people and familial Use synonyms
visitors
.in 2010 . miscellaneous Use synonyms
visitors
reduced by 30 % Use synonyms
whereas
the majority remained as holidaymakers , though there was a reduction in their numberLinking Words
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