The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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what is shown , in 1930 the

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of Stockeford consisted of significant farmland spaces and

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of houses compared to the

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in 2010 where many living areas have been built around the

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. By looking at the north side , there are 2 aspects that contain a large number of houses . The post office , bridge and

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river stocks are still in the same places during the 16 decades . In 2010 the garden was shrunk into a smaller area and the large house was reconstructed into a retirement home .

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, the farmlands

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completely disappeared from the

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and the 2 shops either. The primary school was at it is the same place but 2 large buildings were built beside it .

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2010 the farmlands were completely demolished and the living population number was clearly increased by a huge ratio in the

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.