The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
According to
what is shown , in 1930 the
town
of Stockeford consisted of significant farmland spaces and
minority
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a minority
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of houses compared to the
town
in 2010 where many living areas have been built around the
town
. By looking at the north side , there are 2 aspects that contain a large number of houses . The post office , bridge and
the
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river stocks are still in the same places during the 16 decades . In 2010 the garden was shrunk into a smaller area and the large house was reconstructed into a retirement home .
Also
, the farmlands
was
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completely disappeared from the
town
and the 2 shops either. The primary school was at it is the same place but 2 large buildings were built beside it .
To sum up
we could say ,
by
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that by
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2010 the farmlands were completely demolished and the living population number was clearly increased by a huge ratio in the
town
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • town
  • population
  • transformed
  • bustling
  • road network
  • residential areas
  • industrial sites
  • commercial zones
  • river
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • schools
  • hospitals
  • shopping centers
  • educational facilities
  • healthcare facilities
  • urbanization
  • development
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