The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart compares the

percentage

of

women

and

men

in one Asian country who passed their driving

test

between 1980 and 2010. Based on the chart, the

number

of

women

who passed their driving

test

is significantly higher than that of

men

. In the case of

women

, the

number

of

women

passing their driving

test

rose every ten

year

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years

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from 1980 until 2000. It starts from

near

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nearly

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50% in 1980,

then

gradually

reach

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reaches

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more than 50% in 1990. The highest

number

recorded is near

to

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70% in the year 2000.

However

, that

number

slightly declined in the 2010 record.

On the other hand

, the

number

of

men

who passed their driving

test

also

have

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an upward tendency as

women

do. But the level

of

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starting

percentage

shown

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lower

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a lower

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percentage

than

women

, which

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is noticable

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noticable

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noticeable

in 1980 that the

percentage

only recorded less than 30% of

men

passing the driving

test

. The

number

sequentially

rise

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rose

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to

near

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nearly

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40% in 1990, and

near

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nearly

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50% in 2000. Meanwhile, in

the

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2010, no increased

percentage

was recorded so the

number

remains stable.