The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The bar chart compares the
percentage
of women
and men
in one Asian country who passed their driving test
between 1980 and 2010. Based on the chart, the number
of women
who passed their driving test
is significantly higher than that of men
.
In the case of women
, the number
of women
passing their driving test
rose every ten year
from 1980 until 2000. It starts from Change to a plural noun
years
near
50% in 1980, Change the word
nearly
then
gradually reach
more than 50% in 1990. The highest Correct subject-verb agreement
reaches
number
recorded is near to
70% in the year 2000. Change preposition
apply
However
, that number
slightly declined in the 2010 record.
On the other hand
, the number
of men
who passed their driving test
also
have
an upward tendency as Change the verb form
has
women
do. But the level of
starting Change preposition
apply
percentage
shown
Wrong verb form
showed
lower
Correct article usage
a lower
percentage
than women
, which Add a missing verb
is noticable
noticable
in 1980 that the Correct your spelling
noticeable
percentage
only recorded less than 30% of men
passing the driving test
. The number
sequentially rise
to Wrong verb form
rose
near
40% in 1990, and Change the word
nearly
near
50% in 2000. Meanwhile, in Change the word
nearly
the
2010, no increased Change the article
apply
percentage
was recorded so the number
remains stable.Submitted by annisaseptidwiyanti on
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