You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 word

This

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These

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two pie

chart

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charts

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illustrates

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illustrate

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results

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the results

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of a survey

into

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of

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the popular leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. First of all, there are 5 categories that European children were used to in 1985. It was watching TV(32%) ,talking with friends(21%), eating out(23%) ,talking with their family (18%) and other occupations.

Secondly

, in 1995, there were 6 activities that adults were really into. But,

in

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this

year the most useful activities were watching television 30% and playing computer games

for

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27%.

Nevertheless

, talking with friends and

with

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family members was the least important thing that grownups forget.

Overall

, in these two different

years

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years,

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there were dissimilar lifestyles.

Although

, spending time in front of

tv

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the tv

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was the highest percentage, and the lowest percentage was making conversation with their parents.