The graph gives information about the percentage of the population of four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. https://study4.com/media/ielts_writing_questions_2023/images/image6.png

The line graph demonstrates the

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proportion

of the urban population in four different Asia nations between 1970 and 2020, with predictions until 2040.

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, there are projected increases in the

amount

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of people living in urban areas of all countries examined, with

Malaysia

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dominating the chart for the vast majority of the period. In 1970, the proportion of city residents in

Malaysia

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precisely a third of the former's

polulation

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population

, after which it is expected to sour continually to over 80

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in 2040, significantly higher than any other countries listed in the chart. In spite of starting from the lowest

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, at nearly 15

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, the urban

polulation

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population

rate of Indonesia almost exactly mirrors

Malaysia

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's upward trend. It rose dramatically, surpassing those of Thailand in 200 and the Philipines in 2010 to become the second highest before being forecast to reach just above 60

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in the final year. Moving to two remained countries, the percentage of urban inhabitants in

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the Philipines

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Philipines

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Philippines

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was the highest

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, at above 30

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. After being exceeded by

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in 1980, the Philipines witnessed a rise to nearly

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half of the population, regaining its dominant position after a decade.

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,

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dominance was short-lived, as the rate had dropped gradually to

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approximately

41

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ny 2010, and it is

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anticipated to have climbed by roughly 10

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by 2040.

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Thailand followed a similar pattern but ranked

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from 2000 onwards, its

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firgure

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began at

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close

to one-fifth of its population prior to being estimated to more than double by the end of the period