You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the proportions of Australian production sold to four different nations between 1990 and 2012. It is remarkable that the percentage of exports in Japan and the US show a decreasing trend over a period of 22 years. Comparetively, the export products,
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sold to China and India, witnessed a significant increase from 1990 to 2012. In 1990, the percentage of imports from Australia in China and India were similar, at around 2% and 3% respectively. Indians and Chinese continued to rise significantly 7% and 25% approximately in 2010 . Meanwhile, India reached the rocket bottom at around 5% , China hit a peak of roughly 27% in 2012.
On the other hand
, the rate of Australian exports to America fluctuated from 1990 to 2012 from about 11% to 7%. Even though, the percentage of exported products was the highest in Japan in 1990 at nearly 26%,
whereas
, it witnessed a dramatic decline until 2012 to almost 18%.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • export
  • trend
  • time period
  • individually
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • notable anomalies
  • influenced
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • steady
  • sharp rise
  • sharp decline
  • stagnation
  • data
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