The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph below illustrates three different types of fast food that were consumed in Britain from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
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, it can be seen that fish, chips and hamburger trends increased
while
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Pizza trends declined. On the one hand, looking at the line graph detail, fish and chips started at amount 90 in 1970, it increased to 100 in 1975, after that it rose sharply to approximately 150 in 1980. And
then
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, it rowed dramatically from 300 to 500 at the periods.
In addition
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. Hamburgers started at about 1 in 1970 and they surged slowly began 2 to 101 between 1975 and 1985. The
next,
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it roused dramatically at the point 300
at the end
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periods.
On the other hand
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, Regarding the lowest trends, Pizza declined between 1970 and 1980
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rose
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from 300 to 201. After that, it remained stable in 1985 and in 1990 the amount of 200
at the end
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periods
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fast food
  • Britain
  • decade
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • significant
  • milestones
  • sharp
  • popularity
  • patterns
  • preferences
  • correlations
  • observations
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