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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of people holding a
science
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qualification
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 in two countries, Malaysia and Singapore, and are classified by level of education; namely Master's
degree
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, Bachelor's
degree
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, school examination, and no
qualification
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.
Overall
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, more than half of each country's citizens do not hold any
science
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qualification
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,
which
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and
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 Malaysia's proportion outnumbers Singapore's number.
On the other hand
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, individuals in both countries
are holding
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hold
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 Master's
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degree
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degrees
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as
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at
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 the same amount.
In addition
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, holding
Bachelor's
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a Bachelor's
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degree
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 in
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science
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the science
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 field for
Singaporian
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Singapore
double
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is double
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 the figure for
Malaysian
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Malaysia
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. Regarding no
qualification
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 in
this
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 major, Malaysia's percentage stands at 65%,more than Singapore's ratio by 5%,which displays approximately
one thirds
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one-third
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 holding
science
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qualification
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 in different
catagory
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categories
.
For
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At
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school
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the school
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 level, both countries experience almost one
thirds
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third
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,just different by around 5%. Interestingly,
Malaysian
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Malaysians
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 who graduate
bachelor
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bachelor's
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degree
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 in
science
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 account for one in ten population,being just
a
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apply
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half of
Singaporian
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Singaporean
 graduate students.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words science, qualification, degree with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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