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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the comparison of job destinations for
students
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 who just finished the Anthropology degree from one university and what they earned in 5
years
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.
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, it can be seen that most of the
students
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 landed full-time jobs after graduation, 50 %, and the positions that were paid the highest were
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 in the Governmental sector; over 50 % chose and got paid more than 100,000 dollars annually. The least chosen positions right after receiving the diploma were part-time jobs and postgraduate study, only 50 %, and after 5
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 of
work
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, only 5 % decided to be freelance consultants or
work
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 in the Governmental sector and were paid less than 5000 dollars. Part-time
work
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 is the second most popular type of
work
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, accounting for fifteen %, and after 5
years
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, more than 50 % of people were working as freelancers, earning an average salary of 75,000 dollars. The third one is part-time
work
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, which was chosen by more than ten % of the
students
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. The full-time and postgraduate option was chosen by the same percentage of
students
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 who haven't submitted any information, only 8 %. And the ratio of unemployed graduates was twelve %. Private companies were not the most popular choice among
students
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 after 5
years
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 of working. Most scholars chose them when they were provided with a salary between 50 thousand and seventy 5000. And the least amount of
students
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 chose these companies when they were offered salaries under $5,000 per year.

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