The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The statistic provides information on the electric
production
and consumption
of the leading countries
in 2014. China
and the United States
are the two major contributors to electric production
and consumption
. China
's electric production
was 5,398 kWh
, nearly equal to the combined output of all other countries
except the United States
. The United States
ranked second with an electric production
of about 4,099 kWh
in 2014. However
, the electric consumption
in these countries
was slightly lower than their production
, with China
consuming 5,322 kWh
and the United States
3,866 kWh
.
Russia, Japan, India, and Canada followed the United States
in terms of electric production
and consumption
, each recording above 500 kWh
. France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea recorded under 500 kWh
for both production
and consumption
.
In conclusion, China
and the United States
are the top two countries
significantly contributing to electric production
and consumption
, followed by Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea. Additionally
, all these countries
produced more electricity than they consumed, except for Germany.Submitted by yxxs on
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