The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data about the access to public
transportation
in one country in 2016 was not only different types of groups but also
the location of citizens. The information had been calibrated in terms of percentage.
After analysis, it can be observed that the 0-15 age
groups of adolescents prefer to use public transport (which was almost 40%) in large metropolis rather than another center
( approx. 13%). Change the spelling
centre
In contrast
, the 16-30-year-old youngsters were using public shipping in large cities
which was 55%, whereas
in other areas were 28%, it seems when they were growing, they would like to move to capital cities
. Probing further
, the 31-45 life people were using transportation
in other municipality decreased and also
in large cities
it peaked, it was increased by 60%. Moving ahead, when their age
was 46-60, the percentage of other residents was almost identical, in contrast
, it dramatically decreased in large cities
by almost 35% compared to the previous age
group. Moreover
, in
61-75 Change preposition
apply
age
old citizens preferred to use public transportation
in other countries slightly increased to 20% but in large cities
which was significantly dropped to under 10%. Eventually, the 76+ age
people were using public transportation
in other cities
at almost 8% but in capital cities
which
rose slightly.
Correct pronoun usage
it
Overall
, it can be seen conspicuous from the explained aforementioned tabular chart which expounds that maximum interest can be seen in large places, where the 31-45 age
people prefer to used
public transport, whilst less preference was given to 61-45 Change the verb
use
age
group peoples. So, the using of public transportation
in other downtown fluctuated in different age
groups.Submitted by ahadmajumder152 on
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