The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph represents the total
number
of students
from Iran, Greece, and Turkey at Sheffield University from 2005 to 2009.
In 2005, Sheffield University had 20 Turkish
students
and 40 Iranian
students
. Both numbers gradually increased throughout the years. However
, in 2008, there was a slight decrease in the total number
of Iranian
students
by 10 pupils. Yet, it managed to keep growing. In 2009, there were 160 Iranians enrolled and 120 Turkish
.
On the contrary
, the number
of Greek students
dramatically decreased since 2005. In the beginning, there were 180 students
and after two years, there were only 60 pupils left. Throughout the years, its number
had declined to 40 students
in 2009.
On the contrary
, the total number
of Iranian
and Turkish
students
was growing each year with Iranian
students
dominating the enrollment, followed by Turkish
students
. On the other hand
, the Greek students
were becoming lesser and lesser.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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