The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph

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the

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of international student enrolment at Sheffield University in three different countries between 2005 and 2009.

To begin

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with, in 2005, Greece recorded the highest

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of enrolment, at 180 students,

while

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Iran

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and

Turkey

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started at 40 and 20 students respectively. Greece experienced a downward

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of admission which

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drastically to only 60 participants in 2007.

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, it remained stable until reached only 40 participants in 2009.

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, both

Iran

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and

Turkey

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have

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shown

an increasing

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over the past few years, where

Iran

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had an addition of 35 attendees in 2008, and rose drastically to 160 in 2009.

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, international student admission in

Turkey

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increased to 90 in 2007

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and continued to increase to the

number

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of 120 attendees in the

last

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projected year. All in all, there were significant differences in the

number

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of student

admission

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admissions

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from three consecutive countries, where

Iran

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and

Turkey

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presented a gradual increasing

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, compared to Greece which showed a decreasing yet

fall

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trend

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in the given time span.