The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the

number

of international students from Iran, Greece, and Turkey who studied at

Sheffield

University

from 2005 to 2009. In 2005, there were approximately 180

Greek

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Greeks

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who studied at

Sheffield

University

. They gave the biggest contribution of students compared to the

Iranian

and

Turkish

which were only 40 and 20 peoples. There was a huge decline in 2006 for the

number

of

Greek

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Greeks

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who enrolled

their

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apply

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college in

Sheffield

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at Sheffield

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University

,

nevertheless

; a small climb happened for

Iranian

and

Turkish

, yet

this

situation did not change the order of the

student’s

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students’

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nationality standings. The

number

of

Greek

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Greeks

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who enrolled in their college was nearly 160 people, followed by 60

Iranian

and 50

Turkish

.

Down trends

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for the

Greek

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Greeks

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did not end just there, they continued to drop until 2009 which put them into minorities between these two other countries. In 2009, there were only 42

Greek

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Greeks

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who studied

in

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at

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Sheffield

University

.

On the other hand

,

Iranian

and

Turkish

experienced climbing

between

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during

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this

period.

Turkish

experienced a quite stable inclination between 2005 to 2009,

made

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making

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them

to

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apply

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second

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the second

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position in 2009 with 120

Turkish

who enrolled their college life in

Sheffield

University

. In conclusion, there was a deflation for

Greek

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Greece

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,

nonetheless

Iranian

and

Turkish

experienced a significant escalation which put them

to

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at

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top

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the top

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and second rank for

number

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a number

the number

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of international students.