You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The figure illustrates the amount of money paid for book purchases in 4 various
countries
during a 10-year period starting from 1995. Overall
, it is evident from the data that there was a rising trend in the dollars spent on books
from 1995 to 2005 in all four regions.
The graph shows a slight fall in the average purchase of books
in Germany
and Italy comparatively. There was a steady increase in the amount of money paid from 1995 to 1997 in both countries
, then
the numbers depreciated by 10 million dollars in Italy, while
Germany
kept the growth until 1999. After that the graph indicates a slight fall the Germany
's book.
On the contrary
, France and Austria experienced growth without any drop during these years. In fact
the French tend to buy more and more Add a comma
fact,
books
until 2001 and then
the line stays steady for about two years before another increase in the number of dollars. Germany
followed the same trend with a slight difference, the numbers did not change from 1999 to 2001 and then
soared until 2005.
In conclusion, the population of all four countries
showed a growing interest in buying books
for 10 years. The patterns were quite different between countries
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