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The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
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The graph demonstrates the unpaid working
hour
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hours
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 by married
men
 and
women
 in different categories,
for example
, with different numbers of
children
.
To begin
, married
women
's unpaid working
hours
 rise when they have more
children
. The
unmber
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number
 of unpaid working
hours
 of
women
 with three or more
children
 is double of
women
 without
children
, which is as high as 60
hours
 per week. Meanwhile, there is no obvious difference in
men
's unpaid working
hours
 when they have more
children
. The numbers remain at 17-20
hours
 per week. At the same time, married
women
's unpaid working
hours
is
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are
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 far beyond that of married
men
's.
While
 the number of
diference
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differences
 is higher than 3.5 times when they have three or more
children
 in their family. In conclusion, married
women
's average
hours
 of unpaid work
is
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are
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 much higher than married
men
's
hours
. When the family has more
children
, the unpaid work of
women
increase
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increases
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,
whereas
 the unpaid work of married
men
 did not
shown
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show
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large
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a large
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 difference
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, children, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • demographics
  • household responsibilities
  • societal expectations
  • norms
  • childcare
  • housework
  • gardening
  • contributions
  • family structure
  • cultural implications
  • social implications
  • work-life balance
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