The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two bar charts compare data about the proportion of people who worked in 3 different jobs in 4 various countries in 2 diverse times( 1980 and 2010).
Overall
, in both years industry
was an important sector in all countries instead
of China
, in which agriculture
was a crucial thing, the number of people who worked in industry
was increasing, but other things had decreased trend.
According to
the 1980 plot, in 1980, the main country which had a lot of workers was China
; moreover
, the most popular work was agriculture
with 70% workers; then
Services
and industry
respectively 50 and 40%. Germany, the second country for employees, was the best country in manufacturing because it had 60% ; then
services
had 10% less than the first one
; however
, the lowest one
was farming at 5%. The third one
was the USA, having the same motivation as Germany, so, industry
, services
and Agriculture
had 52, 48, and 9 per cent. The last
one
was Japan which had 49, 40, and 11 per cent for industry
, services
and Agriculture
.
The 2010 graph shows all countries except China
had a jump in industry
for example
Germany, Japan, and the USA roughly 20, 20,and 30 per cent climbed; although
other sections had nearly 10% for services
and 2% for agriculture
fall. Nevertheless
, China
had a 20% and 30% decline in agriculture
and services
, but industry
was equal in the past.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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