The pie chart below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams provided illustrate the revenue of different industries online in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. The four sectors described in the diagram are travel, film and music, books and clothes.
Overall
, spending on books online changed the least while
spending on film and music increased the most.
In 2003, tourism generated the majority of the online profit, followed by clothes. Those two sectors combined make up to 60% of the entire years
income from websites on the internet. It is noteworthy to mention that reading materials revenue on the internet was under Change noun form
year's
one fifth
of the total profit.
Moving on to 2013, there was an observed 12% shift towards buying movies and audio and a decline in both travel-related purchasing and worn goods. In comparison to 2003, film and music combined with the clothes sector were responsible for the largest proportion of the money generated online in 2013.Add a hyphen
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