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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The pie
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 provided information about graduate students in anthropology. The table
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 illustrates graduates’ earnings after 5 years of
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, in the first
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, the highest percentage is full-time
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,
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 the smallest is part-time
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, in the second
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, the biggest proportion of the government sector,
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 the lowest private companies. In terms of graduates, full-time
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 made up just over half,
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, part-time
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 and unemployment comprised around 13%. Regarding  full-time postgrad study and not knowing, it made up merely 8%, but the smallest proportion comprised part-time
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 and postgrad study. Respectively, the salaries of Anthropology graduates the biggest was in the government sector, made up: 25,000$-100,00$ after a 5-year period 50%. Focusing on freelance comprised merely 5%, 15%, and 40%, compared to private companies made up 10%, 25%, and 30.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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