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task1 the graph below gives iformation on the numbers of participants for different activities (film club -martial arts -amateur dramatics -table tennis -musical performances) at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

task1 the graph below gives iformation on the numbers of participants for different activities (film club -martial arts -amateur dramatics -table tennis -musical performances) at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020
#iformation #numbers #participants #activities #film #club #arts #-amateur #dramatics #-table #tennis #performances #center #melbourne #australia #period
The line
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graph
 provides key information about the figures of
people
 who take a
patr
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part
 for some activities at
social
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a social
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center
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centre
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 in Australia specifically in Melbourne
in
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from
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 2000 to 2020 First of all, there were
not
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no
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people
joined
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who joined
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 musical performances in 2000 and 2005. In 2010 the number of participants increased to 10
person
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people
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.
Secondly
, table tennis and amateur dramatics in 2000 were
alomst
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almost
 15 and 25, respectively. It is
also
 important to highlight that, both table tennis and amateur dramatics were
th
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the
seem
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same
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 number of
people
 who joined the
club
 in 2010, at 20
person
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people
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.
However
, martial arts in 2000 was around 35
person
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people
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.
In addition
, martial arts peaked in 2010.
Moreover
, film
club
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clubs
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alomst
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almost
 the trend steady
in
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apply
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over the 20 years.
Furthermore
, film
club
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clubs
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 decreased in 2010 than
jumbed
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jumped
jumbled
 in 2020.
To sum up
, we could say that,
film
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the film
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club
 was the
most
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apply
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activitie
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activity
people
 enjoyed comparison with musical performances.
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