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The chart below shows the sector contributions to india's groos domestic products from 1960 to 2000.

The chart below shows the sector contributions to india's groos domestic products from 1960 to 2000.
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sector contributions to
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groos
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gross
 domestic products during the 40 years.Starting from 1960 to 2000. At the onset,it is evident from the graph that all figures demonstrated an increasing trend except for agriculture, as
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 figure declined during the given
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. At first glance, the index of agriculture began the
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 meaningful higher than other sectors at about 62%,
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 it decreased almost two times
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until
 1990 and reached the lowest point
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 the end of the
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.Showing approximately 15%. Turning to the industry,
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 figure stood at just about 16% in the initial
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,after increasing by about
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10% until
 1980,
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 it stayed  unchanged during the given
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.As for the services,
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 figure was one of the lowest index among other sectors in the initial
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,showing nearly 17%,after mounting almost four times till the end of the
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.Showing about 60%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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